Sarah Pass

I would like a partner.

Hi everyone, I recently found two websites one called isocialeyes and the other called littlerature, the first is like facebook except it is for writers. And the second is a ...

Wow this is incredibly deep. It sounds weird to say that I like something that is so sad but I really did and I wish it didn't end so soon. ...

Hey Persephoneia,this is a great start! but there are a few things you should change to make your story even better! There was a typo in the sentence "I was ...

Hi elfwriter97,this is a good start but there are a few changes I think you need to make. I think the way you are making the lines rhyme is a ...

Hey Carlito, I really liked your song! However there are a few things I would change though. Such as I don't think you had enough of a story,like were the ...

Hey retrodisco66,overall I really liked your poem but there are a few things that I would change such as: the line that says "you can sit it as well" I ...

Oh my Oh my funyuns I ate them again so I'm gonna let the beat drop Oh my funyuns Chorus Funyuns let me eat you up There so many ways ...

I'm in!

"You should come with me." I said. "Why?" The girl said tentatively. "Trust me, you'll only be safe if your with me." "I just don't know." The girl said with ...

I thought this was real,it felt very realistic like something that would happen in real life. though you did make one mistake when you mean to write for you wrote ...

Wow,first I have to say that I think you really figured out exactly how a person in this situation would feel. My teacher made us read poems like this last ...

This is awesome! I know you had to get an A on this! It was brilliantly written. My philosophy teacher would absolutely love this. I don't make it a habit ...

I can't wait to read your first chapter! This was an excellent prologue I really enjoyed reading it and couldn't get enough. There was just one nit pick though. which ...

I thought this was such a cool idea for you to try to understand what she was going through by pretending to be her. This was defiantly an out of ...